
Written by Siddhartha Krishnan | 3 Min Read
As a new author breaking into the literary scene, one of the biggest challenges is to find your voice. Most of our writing is birthed out of what we have consumed as human beings. We are after all a product of our experiences. While as writers we try to be as original and honest as possible, we tend to subconsciously mimic what we have been influenced by, which may not be other writers necessarily. It could just be ordinary people we have met. This is not a bad thing. Imagination is a great quality but so is observation.
Neil Gaiman, in one of his lessons to young writers presses on the need to be brutally honest. But I’ve also heard him say that it’s okay to sound like writers who have influenced you. It often starts like that. He further says, “Let the bad words out, and the good ones will follow”. Eventually, he reckons, “You will find your voice”. This means that finding your voice is a journey.
Having read Pankaj Giri’s critically acclaimed earlier work, ‘The Fragile Thread of Hope’, I think it’s safe to assume that this is a new Indian author who is pursuing that journey. While his latest novel, ‘The Unforgettable Woman’ is a quicker read and departs from his earlier novel in more ways than one, Pankaj does stick to things that make his writing engaging.
Here, he chooses fictional towns in Sikkim to tell his story and explores the themes of love, regret, and forgiveness while touching upon several social issues. The two central characters in the novel are seemingly leading uneventful lives until ghosts of their past come to haunt them. It’s not that such themes have not been explored by Indian authors before. But here are some of my observations that set this author apart from other new Indian authors writing in this genre.
Character development – Just like in his previous novel, here too, the author chooses to dedicate each chapter to a character. He also chooses to journey between the past and present thereby creating a sprawling narrative. An improvement from his earlier novel that I noticed is how he has added several layers to his characters thereby making them more relatable. Whether you agree with them or not is a different discussion, but they aren’t black or white. There is sufficient conflict in the story to keep the reader invested.
Worldbuilding – This is perhaps the author’s biggest strength; his understanding of the culture that he was born into. To write a story rooted in culture is easier said than done. The devil is in the details, and it takes tremendous observation skills to make it authentic. The author has managed to bring to life not just the landscapes of Sikkim but also the mindscapes of its people in a fictional setting. The ability to understand what is unique to the world you have built is imperative to make it believable.
Dialogues – As new writers, we often falter in writing conversations. Effective dialogue writing does require technical prowess. It also comes with practice. I liked how the author through dialogue has been able to unravel the layers of his characters, their mindset, their beliefs, their flaws, and their courage. I liked also how he builds up tension through dialogue thus lending cinematic quality to the narrative.
Vivid Imagery – Often the trap that new writers fall into is to fill sentences with adjectives in a bid to make the narrative vivid. The reader ends up with a verbose prose that can cause an eye sore. In this novel, the language is simple, free-flowing, and effective. It also benefits from good editing. The words woven have been able to create the required imagery in the mind of the reader.
To conclude Pankaj Giri’s ‘The Unforgettable Woman’ is an effective novel that has well-etched characters and tackles important social issues. The book is evocative when it needs to be and the writing has cinematic quality. In case you are looking for a well-written book by an Indian author, give this one a go.
The book is available on Amazon. Link below –
Amazon – The Unforgettable Woman
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About the author –

Siddhartha Krishnan is the author of ‘Two and a Half Rainbows – A Collection of Short Stories’. He is also an enthusiastic blogger, and on his blog (www.whatsonsidsmind.com), he puts out his articles, essays, travelogues, book recommendations, and film reviews.













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